Tonight I finished my conclusion and really went deep into the meaning of my revelation in the essay and came up with a really interesting thought provoking ending, that we can take Piggy and make him an average citizen who has been governed by the government or in Piggy's case Auntie and it has made them weaker because since we are protected by the government we are humane and thus weaker because we are governed if we go into a situation where we are not governed we have to learn to adapt and adapting might mean sacrificing something and will we make the right choice and is there a right choice is kind of the conclusion i got to. I also went through my punctuation and edited.
I also got my essay to be peer reviewed by a friend in another class to get their feedback. I took some of her suggestions and it was very helpful.
Tomorrow in class i plan to revise and edit more as well as make sure i have all of the requirements for the final essay.
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