Rough Draft Process

I first had an idea that was about Piggy relating to the pigs and that each time a pig was killed part of piggy died, but after thinking that through i realized (with the help of Mr. Fichter) that this was to general and was not thinking deeply. So i thought through my idea and based off of that idea I looked at the passages i had drawn out about Piggy, like on pages 83 and 84

From this i realized that Piggy does have a certain characteristic that he often shows through that has changed throughout the book and in the passage above we see that piggy has lost the logic in his life. But if we look at the beginning he is logical and is the only voice of reason but while he is reasonable he is always depending on others and believing the best in others, the problem i saw was that on the island the boys are not always good people and it is hard to be logical and always be dependant on others so as i keep exploring i hope to find proof to support my idea that piggy sacrificed his logic to continue to believe the best in others and this is what got him killed.

This is what i had for my rough draft